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Post by Techno Treecko on Mar 1, 2009 20:42:53 GMT -8
i found a porygon Z since i have no pokemon i started attacking it then i threw a master ball that i saw laying around somewhere but i missed it ran away the master ball broke in half  |
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Post by ~`~Proud Piplup~`~ on Mar 1, 2009 21:08:27 GMT -8
Description: No description at all. Try describing your character and setting more. Fail
Length: Hardly even a paragraph. Add more details, etc. to make it longer. Fail
Grammar: I found a LOT of mistakes. (corrected stuff in BOLD).
Fail
Originality: Hmmm... pretty interesting -- I've never seen a trainer use a Masterball and miss, then a Pokemon run away. Pass
Battle: There wasn't much of a battle. Except when you started attacking it! Hilarious, but, sadly, Fail
Other: OMG SOOOOOOO HILARIOUS!!!!!!
Outcome: Well, that was very, erm, original, and hilarious, but your Masterball missed and the story wasn't done well enough so that wasn't enough. I'm sorry, but... Porygon-Z not captured!
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Post by Soraeon on Mar 5, 2009 2:19:13 GMT -8
ROTFL!
Sadly, since this is barely even a story, and you have not joined Poképets in the first place, I'll lock this.
/Locked/
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