Post by Soraeon on Jan 1, 2009 21:32:37 GMT -8
If you wish to become a ranger, do a grade for these stories and PM it to ~`~Proud Piplup~`~ (admin).
Story 1: Zoey's adventure
hi my name is zoey i want 2 become a pokimon traina sogh i went to proffesor oaks lab i took a pokiball and froowed ite at a butafree it was caut the end!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111111111111111111
Grade Format:
Story 2: Moonlight Witch
Hello. My name is Luna Fujisaki. By day, i am a normal girl. By night, i'm an ametur witch. I have long, black hair which goes to my thighs and dark purple eyes. My skin is pale.
At school, i appear to be mute. No-one bothers talking to me anymore. At home, i talk lots, because i have to recite spells.
When i am a witch at night, i wear a dark Purple witches hat, and a dark purple robe with a dark purple ribbon at the back. When i am a schoolgirl at day, i wear our black skirt and our white shirt. In my school folder (A small saddle bag), i have my witch charm (It looks like a chibi me), and my wand. I also have my text books.
At the end of the school day, i walked home. Mom was waiting at the door.
"Finally." she said, leading me outside. She flicked her wand and in an instant i was in my robe. I took my Broomstick and sat on it. I caught sight of something in the bushes. I threw a dusk ball, and i heard it rolling around. I knew it had been a Poochyena, which was what mom wanted me to catch.
One...Two....Three....
Grade form for this one:
Story 1: Zoey's adventure
hi my name is zoey i want 2 become a pokimon traina sogh i went to proffesor oaks lab i took a pokiball and froowed ite at a butafree it was caut the end!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111111111111111111
Grade Format:
Description: Blah blah blah Pass/Fail
Length: blah blah blah... Pass/Fail
Grammar: blah blah blah......pass/fail
Originality: blah blah blah......Pass/fail
Battle: Blah blah blah..........Pass/fail
Other: Blah Blah Blah...
Outcome: Blah Blah Blah.....Pass/fail
Length: blah blah blah... Pass/Fail
Grammar: blah blah blah......pass/fail
Originality: blah blah blah......Pass/fail
Battle: Blah blah blah..........Pass/fail
Other: Blah Blah Blah...
Outcome: Blah Blah Blah.....Pass/fail
Story 2: Moonlight Witch
Hello. My name is Luna Fujisaki. By day, i am a normal girl. By night, i'm an ametur witch. I have long, black hair which goes to my thighs and dark purple eyes. My skin is pale.
At school, i appear to be mute. No-one bothers talking to me anymore. At home, i talk lots, because i have to recite spells.
When i am a witch at night, i wear a dark Purple witches hat, and a dark purple robe with a dark purple ribbon at the back. When i am a schoolgirl at day, i wear our black skirt and our white shirt. In my school folder (A small saddle bag), i have my witch charm (It looks like a chibi me), and my wand. I also have my text books.
At the end of the school day, i walked home. Mom was waiting at the door.
"Finally." she said, leading me outside. She flicked her wand and in an instant i was in my robe. I took my Broomstick and sat on it. I caught sight of something in the bushes. I threw a dusk ball, and i heard it rolling around. I knew it had been a Poochyena, which was what mom wanted me to catch.
One...Two....Three....
Grade form for this one:
Description: Blah blah blah Pass/Fail
Length: blah blah blah... Pass/Fail
Grammar: blah blah blah......pass/fail
Originality: blah blah blah......Pass/fail
Battle: Blah Blah Blah..... pass/fail
Other: Blah Blah Blah...
Outcome: Blah Blah Blah.....Pass/fail
Length: blah blah blah... Pass/Fail
Grammar: blah blah blah......pass/fail
Originality: blah blah blah......Pass/fail
Battle: Blah Blah Blah..... pass/fail
Other: Blah Blah Blah...
Outcome: Blah Blah Blah.....Pass/fail
